_deepu is a small poet

Valappottukal

On of ma poem i m not sure about that its poem or......he he any way you can suggest wts this...


Innum ormayanu
Manassile thilangunna-
nakshathra pottu
Kuppivalakkilukkangalil
ninte punchiri thiranja-
nalukal....

Aalthirakkil,govanippadiyil-
ninnethiranja nimishangal
Pusthaka thalukalile-
varnnanakal,nammude swapnangal
Varikalil mizhineermashi chalichu-
chertha spandanangal....

Chattal mazhayilannoru-
kudakkeezhil swakaryam paranjathum
Neeyariyathe nin-
nizhalay pinthudarnnathum...

Ezhu nirangal chalichu ninmugam-
varachu theerthathum
Oduvilorunal mizhinirachu-
nee yathra chodichathum...
Nimi neram kondente-
Kannile kazhchakal maranjathum.....

_deepu
21.09.06